TPO32 whether young people or elder people can influence the future society

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  • zty004
    University: TONG JI
    Nationality: China
    October 28, 2019 at 2:32 am

    At present, the controversy regarding whether young people or elder people can influence the future society as a whole has frequently been exposed under the spotlight. From my perspective, ample evidence suggests that young people can make more contribution to future, as the world is in the hands of the young.

     

    First, the young have more chance to try and never fear failure while the elder will have to be in suitable circle owing to duty of family. It is well-known that mid-life crisis has happened to the middle-aged people, and taking a teacher of my high school as an example. He is the middle-aged people and he thought there are no chance for him to go further in his position when he is around 30 years old. At the same time, for the young in 20 years old, there are many chances for them to try new and make decision for their future.

     

    Second, compared with the middle-aged, the young have more energetic and more creative in their job, which will be a good characteristic for the development of society. As we can see, there are many young and intelligent scientists contribution to the process of improvement of human society, such as Edison, Newton and so on. What’s more, not only the scientist but also the ordinary people have made influence for the society. So when we talk about this argument, we shouldn’t forget the truth that without them, our society could not be so convenient and advanced-technology like today.

     

    Admittedly, the elder have made so much distribution to our society when they were young, which also demonstrated that the young can make more important influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society. Therefore, we can no ignore that what they have done for the society and simultaneously acknowledge that the future is prepared for the young.