When you have been friends with someone for a long time, it is important to continue the friendship with the person even if he or she does something you do not like?
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August 2, 2021 at 2:28 pm
When you have been friends with someone for a long time, it is important to continue the friendship with the person even if he or she does something you do not like?
Problems and conflicts not only occur between enemies, but also occur between friends, even between long-time friends. Some people claims that it is hard to continue the friendship when their friend do something they do not like. However, I would not discontinue this long-time friendship just because my friends have done something I do not like.
If your friend does something you do not like, you can get different views and increase your knowledge through the discussion and argument with your friend. When you have some disagreements and fight for yourself, it is an interesting experience. For example, a friend of mine who is called Lisa always has argument with me. But after our argument, we can still be good friends. Because every time one of us will be persuaded. And we enjoy having this brainstorm. That is an interesting experience and can release our stress.
Sometimes your friends do something that you do not like because they are having a very hard and tough time. At this time, they need you more. Instead of leaving them alone, actually you should figure out what difficulties they have met and help them to solve this problem. As my sister for example, her best friend Emma once broke up with her boyfriend. She was so upset and kind of crazy. She always got drunk, even stayed up all night at party and something which my sister really do not like. However, my sister didn’t give up on her instead of asking her why she behaved badly. After my sister understood her, took care of her and cheered her up. Finally she passed through that difficult time. She thanked my sister very much.
In the shell, I would like to maintain the long time friendship even if my friend does something I do not like.
August 3, 2021 at 3:46 pmProblems and [even ]conflicts
not onlyoccur[ not only ] between enemies, [ punctuation error ]but alsooccurbetween friends, even between long-time friends. Some people claims [grammatical error ]that it is hard to continue the friendship when their friend do [grammatical error ]something they do not like. However, I would not discontinue this long-time friendship just because my friends have done something I do not like.If your[ inconsistent in person ] friend[ inconsistent form ] does something you do not like, you can get different views and increase your knowledge through the discussion and argument with your friend. When you have some disagreements and fight for yourself, it is an interesting experience. For example, a friend of mine who is called Lisa always has argument with me. But after our argument, we can still be good friends. Because every time one of us will be persuaded. And we enjoy having this brainstorm. That is an interesting experience and can release our stress.
Sometimes your friends do something that you do not like because they are having a very hard and tough time. At this time, they need you more. Instead of leaving them alone, actually you should figure out what difficulties they have met and help them to solve this problem. As my sister for example, her best friend Emma once broke up with her boyfriend. She was so upset and kind of crazy. She always got drunk, even stayed up all night at party and something which my sister really do not like. However, my sister didn’t give up on her instead of asking her why she behaved badly. After my sister understood her, took care of her and cheered her up. Finally she passed through that difficult time. She thanked my sister very much.
In the shell, I would like to maintain the long time friendship even if my friend does something I do not like.
August 3, 2021 at 3:50 pmPartial revision [Fix same/similar problems throughout your essay and then resubmit it. ]
August 5, 2021 at 2:26 amProblems and even conflicts occur not only between enemies but also occur between friends, even between long-time friends. Some people claim that it is hard to continue the friendship when their friend does something they do not like. However, I would not discontinue this long-time friendship just because my friends have done something I do not like.
Firstly, if my friend does something I do not like, I can get different views and increase my knowledge through the discussion and argument with my friend. When we have some disagreements and fight for ourselves, it is an interesting experience. For example, a friend of mine who is called Lisa always has argument with me. But after our argument, we can still be good friends. Because every time one of us will be persuaded. And we enjoy having this brainstorm. That is an interesting experience and can release our stress.
Secondly, sometimes friends do something that I do not like because they are having a very hard and tough time. At this time, they need me more. Instead of leaving them alone, actually I should figure out what difficulties they have met and help them solve this problem. As my sister for example, her best friend Emma once broke up with her boyfriend. She was so upset and kind of crazy. She always got drunk, even stayed up all night at party and something which my sister really do not like. However, my sister didn’t give up on her instead of asking her why she behaved badly. After my sister understood her, took care of her and cheered her up. Finally she passed through that difficult time. She thanked my sister very much.
In the shell, I would like to maintain the long time friendship even if my friend does something I do not like.
August 8, 2021 at 8:03 pmProblems and even conflicts occur not only between enemies but also
occurbetween friends, even between long-time friends. (Some people claim that it is hard to continue the friendship when their friend does something they do not like.)[rewrite using your own words ] However, I would not discontinue this long-time friendship just because my friends have done something I do not like[repetition ] .Firstly,
if[ when ] my friend does something I do not like[ repetition ] , I can get different views and increase my knowledge through the discussion and argument with my friend[repetition ] . When we have some disagreements and fight for ourselves[ unclear ] , it is an interesting experience[vague ] . For example, a friend of mine who is called Lisa always has argument with me. But after our argument, we can still be good friends. Because every time one of us will be persuaded. And we enjoy having this brainstorm. That is an interesting experience and can release our stress.Secondly, sometimes friends do something that I do not like because they are having a very hard and tough time. At this time, they need me more. Instead of leaving them alone, actually I should figure out what difficulties they have met and help them solve this problem. As my sister for example, her best friend Emma once broke up with her boyfriend. She was so upset and kind of crazy. She always got drunk, even stayed up all night at party and something which my sister really do not like. However, my sister didn’t give up on her instead of asking her why she behaved badly. After my sister understood her, took care of her and cheered her up. Finally she passed through that difficult time. She thanked my sister very much.
In the shell, I would like to maintain the long time friendship even if my friend does something I do not like.
August 8, 2021 at 8:08 pmRemove repetitions. Improve sentence clarity.
