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  • zqqm112233
    University: The North University Of China
    Nationality: China
    March 7, 2021 at 10:13 am

    People around the world devoting more energy in their work to buy more things forget the traditional values and customs. In my opinion, people should cherish traditional values and customs instead of too much hard-working.

    Too much hard-working would make the countless trouble for our family,healthy and so on.The adequate material can’t make human mental world colorful and it may makes people more anxious. Sometimes, people may have to sleep after 12’o’clock at night, which will destroy people’s health. Moreover, the heavy work may makes people can’t take care of their own family, which may makes the whole family broken. For example, software engineers is always busy at work ,which makes them have high suicide rate.

    On the other hand, traditional values and customs bring people enormous benefits to help them live a better life. As we all know, Traditional activity is interesting and meaningful which makes people lose the pressure in their daily work. Meanwhile, it also gives your body a good vacation to have a rest or go to hospital for treatment. Moreover,This is the perfect time that people could repair and strengthen their relationship between their relatives and themselves. For example, The Spring Festival of China is a nice day for people to forgive each other and enjoy their life with family members.

    In conclusion, the proper hardworking which can generate enormous wealth is significant in our normal life.But we can’t forget that traditional values and customs also play a central role in our lives.

    zqqm112233
    University: The North University Of China
    Nationality: China
    March 7, 2021 at 1:21 am

    ‘he heavy work may make people can’t take care of their own family’,’make’ in this sentence should be changed to ‘makes’.’make people heart colorful’This may not be very good.