Currently, people raise the warm discussion on whether all college students should take history classes. In my perspective, it is necessary to let all students in college learn history courses.

In the first step, learning history courses is a crucial factor to form better critical thought for college students. History, as a mirror, reflects the wisdom from the antecedents. In one hand, the experience of history enables college students to improve the judgement in the process of participating in history disciplines. In another hand, the historical events give alarm to everyone and constrain the bad behaviors in daily life. Also, critical thought is essential for the understanding in physical and social discipline. Thus, to satisfy the need of study and high exceptions on occupations, taking history classes does benefits to further develop on critical thought. According to these regards, it is necessary to participate in history courses.

Plus, the acquirement of history classes is favor for the inheritance of culture between generations. History is a vital part of the nation and country because culture is included in history. If people gradually begin to forget history of some ancient countries, their culture will be out of sight in the end. Thus, the good inheritance of history conserve the civilization of a nation. From this view, the liveness of national culture need the guard all college students. Additionally, learning history courses help the communication between different cultures. If we have little common sense of history about other nation, ignoring the difference between cultures may lead to troublesome communication, even the failure of business negotiations. Therefore, the learning of history classes is quite important for the preservation of national culture, but only for the intercultural communication, trade and so on.

In a word, the learning of history courses is urge and necessary for college students. In the view of development for the individual, the acquirement of history disciplines is beneficial to the improvement of critical thought and long-standing developing of the career life for college students. In the view of the cultural preservation and intercultural communications, college students’ learning history classes plays a positive role on cultural inheritance and international communication.

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Score: 40.6

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