Thank you for the email of the decision. I really appreciate and will wait for the further respond truthfully.
The book I recently read about Pixar emphasizes the importance of the management and environment on innovation and work. When people with enthusiasm work in the ideal place, they may have more chance to create masterpiece. So I hope that your department can consider about me again because the Imperial Business School is ideal place for my dream and passion. In addition, I want to contribute my thought and innovation to Imperial College School and the world.
I tried my best to achieve my goal during the past three years in university, and I will do that all the way. So far, I have finished all the courses in my college and kept the score at 90. I am trying to improve my Ielts score and to gain more experience on marketing through FMCG internship.