Binhe Lu
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    Binhe Lu
    University: University of International Business and Economics
    Nationality: China
    September 20, 2019 at 3:09 am

    Some of my opinions:

    1.Disagreement of English tenses

    2. 1st paragraph : when in a classroom or meeting, the teacher or the leader 

    3.  in any situation in conclusion is so  absolute

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    Binhe Lu
    University: University of International Business and Economics
    Nationality: China
    September 20, 2019 at 2:50 am

    一点拙见：

    乍一看全是长句，有不少语法错误，尤其主谓不一致很多

    首段的错误要尽量避免吧

    in people’s everyday life；

    for our students这句有点把考官硬拉成学生阵营的感觉；

    To being a specialist is better + for

    只看了第一段觉得不够开门见山，有点啰嗦

    可以注重一下语法，不要过度追求句子长度

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    Binhe Lu
    University: University of International Business and Economics
    Nationality: China
    September 18, 2019 at 12:47 pm

    Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is often considered as a bad quality for a person. However, some people think that it is a good quality for a person.