Here is my revised version. Thanks!

After the scandal of Robert John Downey Jr., and drug abuse by many professional athletes, some people believe that media scrutiny will destroy everyone’s reputation. However, I disagree with the claim and the reason stated. In my opinion, not everyone’s reputation will be diminished because of media scrutiny.

In contrast to the claim, it is possible for society to regard living men or women as a hero. Guo Tai-Ming, one Taiwanese who is the founder and CEO of Foxconn. Foxconn is an international company located in several countries, like America, China, and so on. Foxconn creates millions of jobs around the world and also become the world’s famous and larger provider of electronics manufacturing services. Because of the success of Foxconn, Guo Tai-Ming becomes a billionaire businessman. But he wasn’t selfish but established a foundation to help poor and vulnerable groups for several years. However, this is not the “key” let him being called a hero by the Taiwanese. In 2021, He donated 1,500 million vaccines when the Taiwanese suffered a hard time because of COVID-19, and even didn’t have enough vaccines for everyone then. Even though he founded Foxconn in 1974, he still is regarded as a hero by the Taiwanese. His reputation has not been diminished by media scrutiny for the past 30 years.

I also disagree with the reason, that the media cannot diminish the reputation of “anyone”, because people have nothing to hide from the media. Furthermore, people will regard someone as a hero because of their great achievements. Take my favorite basketball player, Stephen Curry, for example. He has 3 champion rings in NBA and completely changes basketball nowadays with his unstoppable 3-point shot. Despite his private life catching the public’s attention, it doesn’t diminish his reputation, rather increases his fame because he and his children’s lovely interaction.

In conclusion, the above examples have fully proved that media scrutiny hasn’t and will not diminish anyone’s reputation and many living men and women are still being regarded as heroes.