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  • shayne
    University: 华南农业大学
    Nationality: china
    April 18, 2019 at 7:40 am

    Nowadays, some people proposed that all college students should take history classes, I totally agree with this statement.

    Firstly, most people are unhappy after graduating, although they have already gained a wide range of knowledge or got a nice offer. In China, many parents always hope their children to go to prestigious schools and have a promising career. That may put pressure on children, so they have to stay up finishing Arranged tasks and practicing the knowledge. By learning history, they may able to foster analytical abilities, which may help them become more productive.

    Secondly, learning history offers people a better understanding of the world and even they can learn from the history to predict the future. History can also help people develop problem-solving skills, which could contribute to solve problems. For example, the heroes, like chairman Mao, Zhu Geliang, and HanXin, understand the history of china so they can tackle different problems with ease. Besides, young people have chance to write down their history and  define the era.

    In conclusion, considering many people are dissatisfied with their lives although they have lots of achievement and history that can help them know themselves better. It necessary for them to study history.

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    shayne
    University: 华南农业大学
    Nationality: china
    April 7, 2019 at 3:18 pm

    Schools are the important places of education and teachers are the vital part. In my view, teachers can help develop students’ intellectuality and promote social development.

    Teachers decide indoor and outdoor activities, which is beneficial to students’ intellectuality and social development. Since teachers have undergone specialized training and they are familiar with educational knowledge. They will design relevant activities such as knowledge games and field research for their students. Encouraging students to think actively and find some useful answers for society are the main function of activities. In contrast, parents who lack an in-depth knowledge of curriculum content may not be able to help their children.

    On the other hand, students can develop their own intellectuality and society could make progress because teachers provide students with guideline and rules. Teaching methods could change children’s views toward different things like learning habits and communication skills. Right attitude helps to apply students at study and knowledge gained from learning boosts social development.

    However, parents can discipline and interact with their children when children stay at home. Parents are more willing to help their children to develop good learning habits and social manners. Therefore, student may perform well at school and become a responsible citizen. In a long term, society will be increasingly developmental.

    In conclusion, although parents are the first teachers of children, children will spend massive time with teachers once enrolling on schools. Therefore, I believe that teachers are more essential to students than their parents.