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Score: 37.7 [80 is the minimum score to meet the standard of a high-quality Statement of Purpose essay.]
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Lin Qiu
Score: 51.2 [80 is the minimum score to meet the standard of a high-quality Statement of Purpose essay.]
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Lin Qiu
Score: 53.9
I will send you the final revision soon.
Score: 66.6
The major problem of your essay relates to a large number of sentences exceeding 20 words. This makes it difficult to read.
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Lin Qiu
Score: 65.2
I will send you screenshots to illustrate problems/issues concerning with your essay. Re-submit your revised essay.
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Lin Qiu
Score: 49.7
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Lin Qiu
Score: 53.2
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Lin Qiu
Score: 44.8
I will send you the revised Letter of Recommendation using WeChat.
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Lin Qiu
Hi,
Your first Letter of Recommendation scores 63.1; your 2nd Letter of Recommendation scores 0. Both were unprofessionally written with abundant grammatical, syntactic, factual and logical problems.
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Lin Qiu
Score: 49.5
I have revised your Letter of Recommendation for Chemical Engineering and sent my revision over to you via WeChat.
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Lin Qiu
Hi,
I have revised your CV for Chemical Engineering and sent it over to you via WeChat.
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Lin Qiu
I have sent feedback for your CV for Accounting using WeChat.
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Lin
Score: 46
I have sent feedback for your Statement of Purpose, or Personal Statement, via WeChat.
其实这篇个人陈述写作指南(MIT Guidelines for Writing Statement of Purpose不是我写的。 这是麻省理工提供的写作指导,我认为这是迄今为止最专业的Statement of Purpose写作指导。注意: 是Statement of Purpose;不是Personal Statement.
Score: 56
I will send you screenshots to illustrate problems/errors concerning your essay. Re-submit your revised essay.
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Lin Qiu