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  • TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 14, 2020 at 10:58 pm

    Invalid (duplicated essay)

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 14, 2020 at 10:56 pm

    Invalid

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 14, 2020 at 10:51 pm

    Score: ungraded

    Issues:

    1. More than 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
    2. More than 10% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 14, 2020 at 10:44 pm

    Score: Ungraded

    Issues:

    1. More than 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 14, 2020 at 10:28 pm

    Score: 54.8

    Issues:

    1. More than 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
    2. Convert passive sentences into their active counterparts.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 14, 2020 at 10:23 pm

    Score: 62.5

    I will come back to you shortly.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 14, 2020 at 10:21 pm

    Score: 55.2

    Issues:

    1. More than 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.

    For the sake of time, I am unable to work on two or more essays at the same time for one student. Rewrite and resubmit this essay once you complete the revision of the prior one.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 14, 2020 at 9:18 pm

    Score: 51.2

    Issues:

    1. About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 14, 2020 at 8:52 pm

    Score: 66.3

    Issues:

    1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
    2. Nearly 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 14, 2020 at 8:44 pm

    Score: 48.7

    Issues:

    1. About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
    2. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 14, 2020 at 8:36 pm

    Score: 57.4

    Issues:

    1. More than 80% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
    2. Nearly 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 14, 2020 at 8:28 pm

    Score: 52.2

    Issues:

    1. About 70% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
    2. Nearly 40% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 14, 2020 at 8:20 pm

    Score: 54

    Issues:

    1. Nearly 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 14, 2020 at 8:12 pm

    Score: ungraded

    Issues:

    1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

    TruckersForMe Participant
    Administrator
    February 14, 2020 at 4:56 pm

    Score: Ungraded

    Issues:

    1. About 55% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.

    I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.

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